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PostSubject: Naruto the Power Ranger!   Tue Mar 01, 2011 7:15 pm

Ahhh, Power Rangers. My fondest childhood memories centered around sitting in front of the TV in my Massachusetts summer home watching this show, as it was the only real place with the reception (living in the middle of a forest in New Hampshire didn't do shit for reception. Cable didn't run that deep for some reason). But I enjoyed Power Rangers. In present, it's cheesy costumes with the visible zippers in the back, the shoddy writing, and the over the top action sequences fascinated me in that.

Now, I'm more into the Sentai. Equally cheesy, but the writing and character development beats the shit out of Power Rangers (Particularly with Shinkenger. Great stuff).

And there's also Naruto. Enjoyable as the manga is, why is it the poor Ninja can never get any good fanfiction?

I'm talking about Time Strike, a tale as unbelievable as both fandoms. But with a summary like this:

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After the battle at the Valley of the End Naruto ends up being sent to the Power Rangers Universe. Where he loses his memory and becomes Wesley Collins The Red Time Force Ranger. Years Later Wes returns to the Leaf village to save it from the Akatsuki.
You know it's gonna go downhill.

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In the Valley of the End two male figures about 12 years old were facing each other in a battle to the death .
At least it isn't ninjas playing a children's card game.

No, no, this is Naruto and Sasuke's fight.

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The first figure that was standing on top of one of the statues was that of Sasuke Uchiha who had short black hair tied in a ponytail and black eyes and dress in a blue shirt with the Uchiha clan symbol on it and white shorts and now currently in his curse seal level 2 form which had given him grey skin and two black like arm limbs coming out of his back looking like wings and in his hand was a fully powered up Chidoi and with a fully develop Sharigan in his eyes with killing intent in them . Sasuke look down at the figure on the water below him which was that of his teammate Naruto Uzumaki who had blond hair spike up and blue eyes and dress in a orange jumpsuit who was now on all fours with a red aura in a shape of one tailed fox like the demon Kyuubi that was sealed within him since birth was now currently looking up at Sasuke with his ultimate jutsu the Rasengan glowing in his right hand as he look up at his former teammate.
Killer-eye-burning-text-wall no Jutsu!

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"Sasuke it's not to late to back off. We can stop this pointless fight right now and head back to the village and have Grandma Tsunade look at your curse mark as I am sure she can do something about it." said Naruto as he look at Sasuke with tears in his eyes
"And while we're at it, have her take a look at my lack of commas."

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"You mean go back with you to that village of weaklings who will only hold me back from getting the power I need to kill my brother and avenge my clan. I think not dobe as thanks to the power of my curse mark I have the power right now to start getting stronger. And once I kill you and attain the Magenkyo Sharingan then I will be one step closer to my dream of killing my brother once and for all. " said Sasuke as he look at Naruto with a evil glint in his eyes
First, ow. Second, way to assume the audience isn't familiar with Naruto, writer! Third, it's amazing Sasuke can say that in one breath without passing out.

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As I promise Sakura Chan that I would bring you back no matter what and I always keep my promises to the people I care about.
"I promised Sakura Chan I'd bring you back, to hell with what Sakura Haruno wants!"

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"Well if that the case dobe. Then I will put everything into this Chidori as I am going to kill you and break our bond once and for all. I hope your ready Naruto as I want to know which of our jutsu is more powerful my Chidori or your Rasengan." said Sasuke with a evil laugh as he got into a fighting stance with his Chidori pointed at Naruto
This is starting to feel more like a badly dubbed Kung Fu movie than Naruto.

And then we get a text-wall, which is so painful, I'm going to break it down into two pieces.

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With that Sasuke and Naruto each other head on each with the intent to end the fight with their jutsu. Naruto quickly tried to hit Sasuke in the chest with his Rasengan only to watch Sasuke to avoid his attack by rolling out of the way and delivering a kick to Naruto chest sending him flying across the surface of the water hard a couple of feet. Naruto quickly got back to his feet and saw Sasuke coming at him at full speed with the Chidori in his right hand ready to deliver the killing blow to Naruto and finish the fight once and for all. Naruto seeing that there was no way to get out of the path of Sasuke's attack quickly ran towards Sasuke with the intent to block Sasuke's Chidori with his Rasengan hoping to cancel Sasuke's jutsu with it. As Sasuke and Naruto came nearer towards one another they threw everything they had into their attacks hoping to end the fight once and for all as there attacks contacted with one another.

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As soon as the two jutsu contacted with each other the area around Sasuke and Naruto filled with a white light that covered the two of them as Sasuke shove the Chidori through Naruto's right shoulder . All of a sudden from out of nowhere a huge gust of wind came and hit Sasuke's body real hard in the chest sending the poor Uchiha flying away from Naruto as Sasuke saw a black hole open up behind Naruto and suck Naruto right into it before Sasuke was blinded by the white light as he hit the surface of the water real hard on his back. When the light finally faded away from the area. Sasuke got to his feet and saw no sign of Naruto anywhere except for Naruto's blood on his right hand.
So from what I figure, it was going exactly as the canon was supposed, but Naruto is pulled into a dimensional rift that sent him across the Time-Space Continuum.

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"What the hell just happen. Was I imagining things or did I just see that dobe get suck up into that strange black hole I saw appear behind him. I couldn't have image that as there no sign of Naruto anywhere not even his chakra. But if Naruto did get suck up into that black hole like I saw he did. Then where did it come from as I never seen nothing like it before in my life?" said Sasuke confuse
I'm as lost in your dialogue as you are the situation, Sasuke.

Now things start getting weird. Granted, I have never watched Power Rangers Time Force, but thanks to Linkara I have a good idea on the characters.

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Silver Hills Year 1992

Inside of black limousine heading down the streets of Sliver Hills.
Wow, author, managed to misspell the location's name wrong right after you spelt it correctly! Fail!

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The owner of Bio Labs Mr. Collins who was 35 year old man with gray hair and couple of wrinkles on his face and dress in a gray business suit was on his home from a meeting with his board of directors about some new technology that Bio Lab's scientist were working on that when completed would earn the company more money for them.

Ow.

So yeah. Cut to Silver Hills. And we get the biggest fail in this story yet.

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But at least there doing there job with you there to help them.
You got enough THERE's in that sentence buddy?

But the ramblings of a businessman and his chauffeur are quickly interrupted when they run headlong into yet another text-wall!

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With that Mr. Collins open the door of the limousine as he got out and headed towards the bushes where he had seen the light come from . When Mr. Collins got over to the bushes and moved them aside he saw a 12 year old boy with blond hair that was spike up and whisker like marks on his face and dress in a orange jumpsuit that was torn to pieces. As Mr. Collins look over the boy he saw that he had a blue piece of cloth on his head that had a metal plate on it with a leaf design on it as he turn the boy over to get a better look at him to figure out who he was. As he look the boy over closer he saw where a hole in the jumpsuit on the boy's right shoulder that had blood all over it but without any sort of wound where the blood could have come from which left Mr. Collins confuse as to where the boy came from as he look like he had being through a fight of some kind from the state he was in. All of a sudden Mr. Collins heard someone walking towards him and look up to see Philips standing over him and the boy.
"Oh look, sir, a stranded and wounded boy appearing inexplicably in the middle of the road. Shall we get out and tend to him and treat him as your son?"
"Run him over Phillips. That meeting put me in a foul mood."
"Very good, sir."

No, Collins takes Naruto home. Because instead of asking for the police to to help any--TEXT-WALL!

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With that Mr. Collins pick up the boy in his arms headed towards the limousine with Philips close behind so they could get the boy back to the mansion to find more about him. Two hours later inside the living room of the mansion Mr. Collins and Philips had each being taking turns for the past hour and a half keeping a close eye on there guest. When suddenly as Mr. Collins was reading the newspaper he heard what sounded like a groan coming from the couch the boy was laying on . Mr. Collins look up from the newspaper and at the couch and saw the boy was coming to as he sat up and had his right hand on his head like his head was in pain.

Geez, this chapter is long! It's like A.I. in text-form!

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"Ah man what happen to me?" ask the boy with a groan
"What happen was someone set up us the bomb."

Because it's so long, all that happens is Naruto is renamed Wes, groomed to appear like he will in Power Rangers, end of chapter. The authorleaves us with one last text wall:

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That it for the first chapter of my new story. So what do you guys think about the fact of Naruto being sent to the ranger universe and losing his memory and becoming Wes the Red Time Force Ranger. The reason I decided to this story as no one has done this before and I wanted to be the first one to do it. Right now Naruto still has his own body but I plan on having Naruto or Wes as he is now change his appearance to look identical to the real Wes from Power Rangers Time Force that includes his hair color and style as well as his whisker marks which will be gone next chapter. As always please review and leave comments as I want people's options on this story. Thanks and stay tune for the next chapter which will be set two months after the forever red episode.
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PostSubject: Re: Naruto the Power Ranger!   Tue Mar 01, 2011 8:09 pm

is right. Does the author ever mention what happened to Wes? Because I'm pretty sure Wes would notice if someone else was running around claiming to be him.
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PostSubject: Re: Naruto the Power Ranger!   Tue Mar 01, 2011 9:36 pm

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The first figure that was standing on top of one of the statues was that of Sasuke Uchiha who had short black hair tied in a ponytail and black eyes and dress in a blue shirt with the Uchiha clan symbol on it and white shorts and now currently in his curse seal level 2 form which had given him grey skin and two black like arm limbs coming out of his back looking like wings and in his hand was a fully powered up Chidoi and with a fully develop Sharigan in his eyes with killing intent in them . Sasuke look down at the figure on the water below him which was that of his teammate Naruto Uzumaki who had blond hair spike up and blue eyes and dress in a orange jumpsuit who was now on all fours with a red aura in a shape of one tailed fox like the demon Kyuubi that was sealed within him since birth was now currently looking up at Sasuke with his ultimate jutsu the Rasengan glowing in his right hand as he look up at his former teammate.

What is with the run on sentences and how are you able to read those? I keep losing my place.
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