Zeiss: here's some snarking music
[You must be registered and logged in to see this link.]Delcat: Okay, here we go. Again, I don't know what the details are on this one--it says it's a commission, but I don't know if it was commissioned to be drawn or commissioned to be translated. Whatever the case, it's apparently fresh off the /d/ presses and ready to terrorize the world.
Zeiss: THE MONSTER CALLED /d/ IS ATTACKING THE CITY
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Delcat: I also have no idea what series this is, but freckle-girl scares the piss out of me.
Zeiss: Is this a Mike, Lu, & Og doujin?
Delcat: More like Dyke, Cooze, and Cock
Delcat: Which I admit is kind of reaching but what the hell kind of cuss starts with Og
Zeiss: Well, look, more banana tits!
Zeiss: Dickgirls and banana tits go hand in hand.
Delcat: Did I specifically state that there were dickgirls in this, or did you just feel it in your water?
Zeiss: It's /d/. I can put two and two together.
Delcat: I think the priestlady is feeling it in her water. Run, priestlady, run!
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Zeiss: Do priestesses piss holy water?
Delcat: No, they just turn water into urine.
Zeiss: ...Her vulva is bigger than her HEAD
Delcat: Speaking of piss, did I mention this doujinshi likes piss? Piss piss piss.
Zeiss: ...
Zeiss: this is going to be a fun one, isn't it?
Delcat: I warned you, man. I gave you all due warning.
Delcat: Unless I forgot a couple of kinks, which is entirely possible.
Delcat: I'm confused by the dialogue. "You don't mean, you want her to..." ...what?
Zeiss: We're on the second page and already the art is this bad
Delcat: At least there's a background. And lovingly detailed piss.
Zeiss: This honestly looks traced. Nothing looks like it's in any relation to anything else.
Delcat: I would not be surprised.
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Zeiss: I actually think the layout here is kind of cool.
Delcat: Hey, who left this naked girl lying on the steps? I could have broken my neck!
Zeiss: It's a shame about everything else.
Delcat: The layouts are...ambitious, to say the least.
Zeiss: So many questions.
Delcat: Wait until you see the next two pages. It's a splash! ...in more ways than one!
Zeiss: D=
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Zeiss: WHERE THE FUCK IS WALDO
Delcat: In the apartment below, banging on the ceiling with a broom. He hasn't slept in six years.
Zeiss: Someday, I'm going to cross across one of these where no one says "Move your hips more!" and I will be delighted
Delcat: It was about here that I started rushing to save the entire thing before the thread died.
Delcat: These women don't even have hips, they just have a pair of beachballs stapled to a spine.
Zeiss: HEY WAITAMINUTE THESE WOMEN HAVE SMALL VAGINAS
Delcat: I dunno, the preggo lady is kinda bulging.
Delcat: Maybe priestlady's vulva is trying to run for help.
Delcat: Oh, and the dicks are censored, I forgot to mention. Doesn't that make this loads less offensive?
Zeiss: It looks like preggo girl's vagina is trying to suck itself inward
Zeiss: OH IS THAT WHAT THOSE ARE
Delcat: I DO NOT KNOW THEY COULD POSSIBLY BE EGGPLANTS
Delcat: OR MS PAINT THROWING UP
Zeiss: INCONVIENTELY LOCATED CABINETS
Delcat: I wonder how many long hours the artist spent on this. I like to think he did it on a plane ride, with a little old lady looking on in horror.
Zeiss: Asking her for references...
Zeiss: SO HOW WOULD YOU FEEL IF YOU WOKE UP AND THERE WAS A DICKGIRL ORGY
Zeiss: HOW MANY EXCLAMATION POINTS DO YOU THINK YOU'D EMENATE
Zeiss: AS A WOMAN
Delcat: I THINK I WOULD GO THE INTERROBANG ROUTE
Delcat: FOR CLASSINESS
Zeiss: AH THANK YOU
Zeiss: I SHALL PUT THIS INFORMATION TO GOOD USE
Delcat: Well, I think this page has soaked in...er, I mean, we've soaked up enough of this page. Let's move on.
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Delcat: The vulva looks on in shock and awe
Delcat: And a puddle of various bodily fluids
Zeiss: Put two little beads where her pubic hair would be, and you'd have a little Cthulhu.
Delcat: D'aaaaw.
Delcat: That dick in the first panel is nearly the size of her head. Things the size of heads is apparently a theme here.
Zeiss: Remember that Simpsons episode where Bart and Homer eject themselves into space? That's what top left panel reminds me of.
Delcat: Yeah, there was a lot of breastmilk in that episode, I remember.
Delcat: "What's going on...? Those mosaics are so confusing!"
Zeiss: Don't lick that toadstool! It might be dangerous!
Zeiss: This is worse foreshortening than
PARTYTIME.
Delcat: Terrible foreshortening is ALSO a theme here.
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Delcat: LESLITAAAAAAAA
Zeiss: THEY'RE PISSING OUT CUMS BY THE SECOND
Zeiss: Leslita is the new Quamp, it's official
Delcat: Funny, it really does look like pancake batter.
Delcat: Think they can do it in animal shapes?
Delcat: Mickey Mouse cumcakes! For the kids!
Zeiss: Why doesn't she have hips?
Delcat: Told you, beachballs on spine. It's ~*MAGIC*~
Delcat: Violence is so adorable!
Zeiss: awwwwwww
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Zeiss: So Del, is this really what succubi do?
Delcat: Actually, I contacted one of the succubi OCs from my old RP campaign on the subject.
Delcat:
[You must be registered and logged in to see this link.]Zeiss: So I'll take that as a 'no', then
Zeiss: In the first panel alone, there's a giant disembodied ass lunging out at me, and someone performing annilingus on a cardboard standee.
Delcat: General consensus was that they don't take their work home with them.
Delcat: If I had to perform annilingus, I'd prefer to do it on a cardboard standee. I can see that logic.
Delcat: Is their very aura dripping with jizz? You'd think it'd smell.
Zeiss: Either that or she's practicing her mime act at a very innoppurtune juncture.
Delcat: Think that milk is banana flavored?
Zeiss: It better not be pancake flavored.
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Delcat: Look at this, I'm molting! {/Gilbert Gottfried}
Zeiss: And this, kids, is why you shouldn't fuck on the sun.
Zeiss: You know, guys can't come and urinate at the same time. Is it different for girls?
Delcat: Are her eyes melting out of her sockets? Bad trip, man.
Zeiss: LIME AND LIMPID GREEN A DICKGIRL SCENE A FUCK BETWEEN THE COCK YOU ONCE KNEW
Delcat: Yes, actually, since they're two different sets of plumbing. There's actually a constant argument over whether female ejaculate is composed of piss or...pancake batter.
Zeiss: But can you piss out cums?
Delcat: Couldn't they just, y'know...restore the succubi's energy with magic?
Zeiss: That is the question.
Delcat: I have never tried, sir.
Delcat: I value my sheets more than that.
Zeiss: 'Cause, uh, only the piss is magic?
Zeiss: oh god that girl's legs in the last panel
Delcat: Piss is piss even if it sparkles.
Delcat: oh God I didn't notice it's like the trident optical illusion
Delcat: but with jizz
Zeiss: And that girl in the middle panel has labia the size of her hands.
Delcat: You mean you don't?
Zeiss: Unfortunately not.
Delcat: What kind of dickgirl are you, then?
Zeiss: A labia-impaired one, I guess.
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Delcat: I think I'd be making more of a D: face if I started lactating yogurt.
Zeiss: I think I'd be making more of a D: face if my labia started inflating.
Delcat: I think I'd be making more of a D: face if the action lines from Vibrator Company started attacking me. We saw what happened LAST time.
Zeiss: ...If you look closely, her vagina itself isn't secreting anything. It's all coming from the crevice underneath her labia.
Delcat: Are you saying her taint is bleeding milk?
Delcat: Are we having an Akira moment?
Delcat: ...again?
Zeiss: That always seems to happen.
Zeiss: Well, the drugs *are* kicking in.
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Delcat: Uh, yeah. Two actions that are DEFINITELY not related. It's like punching someone in the nose and their ears wiggling.
Zeiss: SHE REACHES IN, AND GRABS RIGHT ON TO YOUR CLIT
Delcat: I mean not that I think anyone seriously thought otherwise except SOMEONE SERIOUSLY THOUGHT OTHERWISE
Zeiss: SHE SEEMS TO HAVE THE INVISIBLE SHITS, YEAH
Zeiss: ...Her torso is directly attatched to her legs. Like an Iguanodon.
Delcat: And her vulva is crawling up her body, possibly to seek shelter between her tits.
Zeiss: Is she pregnant with her own vagina?
Zeiss: What is going on?
Delcat: Man,
Freud would start pissing if he heard that one.
Delcat: I don't know, man, let's try to roll with it.
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Delcat: "Oh boy, I get to birth five invisible sea cucumbers a day from now on. No, that doesn't worry me at ALL."
Zeiss: So they just gave her a cocktail of laxatives?
Zeiss:
[You must be registered and logged in to see this link.]Delcat: It's like they wanted scat without the filth and smell of it, which is...kind of the point of scat, I'd been led to believe.
Zeiss: I thought her foot was a piece of shit there for a second.
Delcat: There is not a laxative known to man nor beast that makes shit invisible and scentless. If there was, Sues would be snarfling it down like candy.
Zeiss: TONIGHT, A TRAGIC DISASTER AT THE SLINKY PLANT...
Delcat: Are...are her nipples talking?
Zeiss: It's Mark Trail all of a sudden.
Delcat: How did she keep her glasses on this long, anyway? Were they just glued on with cum or something?
Zeiss: Her nipples, vag and anus just have the best LOLWUT expression.
Delcat: Oh God they do. I could cut that out and make it into a new meme, if I was a HORRIBLE PERSON.
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Zeiss: And now the naughty bits are going o_0
Delcat: "You forgot humans have to breathe again, didn't you?"
"Gomen nasaaaaaai (T-T)"
"Fine, go throw the body on the heap."
Zeiss: She's making the beast with three conjoined backs!
Delcat: This room has got to be like a giant Slip'n'Slide at this point. I hope they have "WET FLOOR" signs, or they're gonna get sued.
Zeiss: This is gonna make for the worst Pauly Shore movie ever.
Delcat: Now, now, Zeiss, don't go saying anything you'll regret later.
Zeiss: TOTAL SHITTAGE FOR THE TIT-ZONE
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Zeiss: First panel: NEED MORE CHEESY POOFS
Delcat: So basically every body part on these girls is like a "Ring bell for crap" appendage, is the basic gist here
Zeiss: Press once for shit, twice for piss.
Delcat: It really is a lot easier if you think of them as sea cucumbers.
Delcat: And think of them being as upset by this as we are.
Delcat: Is she shitting on a random patch of grass?
Delcat: Or did someone steamroll Crono flat?
Zeiss: I think I would rather see two sea cucumbers mating than whatever these things are.
Delcat: It's...actually pretty cool, I've seen nature documentaries.
Delcat: Is that a date, Zeissy?
Zeiss: Sing along (sing along) with the birds! It's a wonderful page but it's all about turds!
Zeiss: I guess
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Delcat: Y HALO THAR
Zeiss: The cock is a sexual organ attatched to male humans and succubi. It looks like this:
Zeiss: {/vonnegut]}
Zeiss: ...Unless I'm wrong, her dick has a rabbit attachment
Delcat: I was always under the impression that incubi had the cock market covered.
Zeiss: Which would actually be pretty handy, now that I think about it.
Delcat: ...I had totally failed to notice that. It really does.
Delcat: But it's up way too high to do its job.
Zeiss: Apparently, her cock stole the muscle of that girl's fingers.
Delcat: It has to to survive. At this point it's basically a giant terminal tumor.
Delcat: Oh, you know what? I think that's actually the cock of the girl behind her. That was a good idea, though. ...well, in this manga's context.
Zeiss: We can dream, Del, we can dream.
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Zeiss: Her naughty bits are Noseybonk
Zeiss:
[You must be registered and logged in to see this link.]Delcat: I would kind of like eager beaver!succubus if not...well, if not for everything else in the manga.
Delcat: NOOOOOOOOOO
Zeiss: PLANTING A CLUE TO THE NEW WORD
Delcat: So, Zeiss, there are six of them. Can you name all the orifices that they're gonna use?
Zeiss: let's see - Vag, ass, mouth...
Zeiss: urethra and ears?
Delcat: Close!
Delcat: I think that one directly behind her is just going to gnaw all her skin off or something
Delcat: That girl is not well
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Delcat: OH GOD ZEISS THEY'RE DOIN' THAT THING WITH THE TITS AGAIN
Zeiss: OWWWWWWWWWWW
Delcat: At least that's the most painful thing on the pageOH GOD ARE THE COCKS PUSHING OUT HER STOMACH WALLS
Zeiss: And there's another weird bulge right to the left.
Delcat: I think that's a second cock.
Delcat: ...maybe.
Zeiss: So somebody is fucking her liver?
Delcat: No, the liver's a solid organ. Probably a lung.
Delcat: I think this page really highlights just how fucking random the censoring is.
Zeiss: JAPANNNNN
Delcat: 8====D \(^o^)/
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Delcat: Yes, Susie, her hand is entering your pussy, we saw. It's not all ABOUT you.
Zeiss: It looks more like she's just picking at it than anything.
Delcat: That bra is like the anti-bra
Delcat: And I'm not sure how it's being held up
Zeiss: I'm not sure what the hell is up with her arms.
Zeiss: This is Liefield-tier anatomy here, folks.
Delcat: *tries to manage the same position*
Delcat: *fails*
Delcat: *even without the head doubling*
Delcat: Is that supposed to be the girl from Spice and Wolf in the middle there?
Zeiss: It looks like she has nachos in her hair.
Delcat: Like I said, the girl from Spice and Wolf.
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Delcat: Oh fuck me Nippon Heroine 3 flashbacks
Zeiss: HAIRY ARMPIT'S CRYIN'
Zeiss: FALLEN ANGEL DYING
Zeiss: RISK A LIFE TO DRINK YOUR MILK
Delcat: IT MAKES ME CRYYYYY WHEN DICKGIRLS DESERVE TO DIE
Delcat: God, she's gonna be a plucked goose at this rate. That amount of shedding can't be healthy.
Zeiss: hold on
Zeiss: MAKE ME AN ANGEL THAT FLIES FROM A DICKGIRL
Zeiss: MAKE ME A SWIMSUIT WITH NO PURPOSE AT ALL
Zeiss: JUST GIVE ME ONE THING THAT I CAN HOLD ON TO
Zeiss: TO BELIEVE IN THIS ARTWORK IS JUST A HARD WAY TO GO
Delcat: *golf clap* You forgot one thing, Zeiss.
Zeiss: And what is that?
Delcat: How wonderfully LEEEEEEEEWWWWWWWWD it all is
Zeiss: WHEN CORRECTLY VIEWED, *EVERYTHING* IS LEWD
Delcat: More importantly, I'm thirsty. Let me drink your milk, please.
Zeiss: One bourbon, one Scotch, one tiiiiiiiiiit
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Delcat: Well, I'm going to be sticking to orange juice for a while.
Zeiss: There was a girl
Zeiss: A really ethereal girl who was pregnant, you see
Zeiss: Got drowned by 800 gallons of milk in a succubi orgy
Zeiss: THIS ANGEL'S GONE TO (boob )HEAVEN
Zeiss: THIS ANGEL'S GONE TO (boob) HEAVEN
Delcat: Very nice.
Zeiss: THIS ANGEL'S GONE TO (boob) HEAVEN
Zeiss: and yeah
Delcat: Is that girl in the second panel actually the guy from Anal Justice 2?
Zeiss: fffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffff
Delcat: IT IS AN UNCANNY RESEMBLANCE, IS IT NOT??
Zeiss: last panel: AGAIN with the LEGS
Delcat: I've got no tits to hold me down, to make me come, to make me crown
Delcat: I've got no tits but I still pee, I've got no tits on me
Zeiss: Oh heaven, heaven is a place
Zeiss: A place where lactation seems to always happen...
Delcat: HEY ZEISS, YOU KNOW WHAT
Zeiss: WHAT WHAT
Delcat: I THINK WE'VE MILKED THIS PAGE FOR ALL IT'S WORTH
Zeiss: BADUMTISCH
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