Who Ya Gonna Call? Gary Stu!!!

Thanos6 wrote:

Trioculus wrote:

Underneath all the blatant copying from the Ray
and Winston scene from the first movie (Note: Go to any of the
Ghostbusters boards and ask about the music cue from that bit!)

Eh?

"What's that music they play after Ray and Winston have their talk about God?" is a common Newbie question on the Ghostbusters boards.

(And it's just something Elmer Bernstein came up with)

Thankfully someone necro'd this before me.

Okay, I read through this entire snark... it had me in tears in laughter and headache-induced confusion the entire time. But I noticed something that Trio seemed to miss in the concluding chapter, though he did hit part of it.

Trioculus wrote:

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He quickly ran to the others and started up his pack as they formed a line.

“See you on the other side, Winnie.” Brendan said as he fired at Gozer.

“Nice working with you, Dr. Rome.” Winnie said.

Um...I thought we'd established he'd lied about that doctorate?

I thought his name was Brendan French?

French, Roman . . . it's all Europe. [You must be registered and logged in to see this image.]

SF3P0X1 wrote:

Thankfully someone necro'd this before me.

Okay, I read through this entire snark... it had me in tears in laughter and headache-induced confusion the entire time. But I noticed something that Trio seemed to miss in the concluding chapter, though he did hit part of it.

Trioculus wrote:

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He quickly ran to the others and started up his pack as they formed a line.

“See you on the other side, Winnie.” Brendan said as he fired at Gozer.

“Nice working with you, Dr. Rome.” Winnie said.

Um...I thought we'd established he'd lied about that doctorate?

I thought his name was Brendan French?

Lo...good catch. Brendan can't keep track of his own character name (Brendan Rome being the writer, Brendan French being the self insert)

I've written a snark on another Brendan story; I gotta get that posted soon.

I'm gonna go.... [You must be registered and logged in to see this image.] lol.... Great posts and thanks for making my day. xD

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“Oscar was having some nightmares so I thought I’d stop by the HQ. Of course by then, you were gone and I knew pretty much that the first place you’d go to is the Museum since that’s where Peter told me you were going.”

“Uh,” Brendan said pointing behind them, “As much as I’d hate to break up your Opera moment, Gal-Pals, we’ve got company!”

I saw this and was horrified. Was Chris-chan going to arrive and make a bad fic worse.(I also apologize for necroing.)