Best Lines from Your NaNo (context optional)

"In that case, we find the selkie's seal skin, she puts it on, and we go back into the prison building and find knives and guns to attach to her. Maybe a laser gun as well."

Quote :

“An offer?” Emrys scoffed. “My heart is not something that can be given to the highest bidder.”

“Who said anything about your heart?” his father asked.

It's one of those exchanges that seems incredibly cheesy and I wanna say it's unrealistic but it's actually not that far off from shit I heard from my own parents. Hell, some of the stuff I heard was even worse because it just made no sense in context. Real life is unrealistic, I guess.

"His voice sounded as though he were speaking through his own death rattle."

I'm writing a lot better this NaNo than I did in my last, I think. There are more points where I think, "Yeah, that passage/comparison is pretty goddamn rad."