"Brother Busted" (Not Work Safe, Not Brain Safe, Not ANYTHING Safe)

Story here. Read at your own risk.

In short: 16-year old Kyle (although his name changes on occasion) is caught by his 13-year old sister Kim and his Aunt Vivian (babysitting while his parents are out of town) masturbating with his sister's underwear. They torture him.

This has been posted before in various other incarnations of GAFF/HOBF. At least one female poster said it gave her pains in her "phantom cock." I won't post any of the actual torture bits, just in case it violates this board's version of The One Rule. Some of the dialogue should be enough.

Quote :

But Kyle is in a position where
he has to take whatever is dished out, so he may get much more than a
little tap tonight. Now tell me honest, Kim: If I set it up, can you kick
your brother in the nuts so hard that he thinks he's gonna die?

Quote :

] "If you're not heading toward the stairs in three seconds, perv-boy,
I'm gonna pull you off the bed and lay you face down, spread-eagled, on
the floor. And Kim's gonna jump up and down on your nuts until they pop!
You'll have nothing but a scrotum full of jelly!"

Quote :

"You bet there are, sweetie.
Why don't you go look in your daddy's medicine cabinet and see if he's
got a tube of Ben Gay and bring it down? I used it once on a boyfriend I
was playing these kinds of games with, rubbed it all over his cock and
balls. Ooh, that deep-heating action started in to work, and it burned
and burned, and he couldn't do a thing about it. He screamed himself
hoarse from the pain."

I'm sure this should be enough to get the idea across. :throwup: I've long considered writing a sequel where he takes revenge on them.

Huh. Yep, this fic is pretty horrible. I like the way the author censored the word "children" (apparently), but not the ages of the characters, and still put a disclaimer at the top of the fic saying that everyone involved was over 18. Clever.

Thanos6 wrote:

I'm sure this should be enough to get the idea across. :throwup: I've long considered writing a sequel where he takes revenge on them.

Please, please don't do that. All you would be doing is adding more torture to the pile, but pretending that your kind of torture is morally justified.

Also, I thought GAFFugees frowned upon posting original net fiction unless it was really, really horrible. Does this mean I should start posting all the original crap I find on the net? For instance, I have here a fic that involves maggots, mid-coital death, and a thirteen-year-old girl with harlequin ichthyosis (Warning: link may not be brain safe). Like this fic, it's pretty much unsnarkable due to the one rule. Should I post it anyway?

*I realize this sounds like I'm dismissing your story, but I'm just trying to ask if I could be of service.

Oh God, this. Thanks for reminding me.

Thanos6 wrote:

I've long considered writing a sequel where he takes revenge on them.

DO IT DO IT DO IT

This is not "femdom" any more than Ann Coulter presents a reasonable, logical argument. I was under the impression that Dominance games were (deep-down) about fun for both parties.

this is blasphemy
This is maddness.
THIS IS BROTHER BUSTED!

Thanos6 wrote:

Story here. Read at your own risk.

Thanks, I'll pass on this one.

... the Ben Gay thing makes me think this person is a regular browser of 4chan. I'm not sure whether that helps or hurts this story.

Dr. Professor Science wrote:

... the Ben Gay thing makes me think this person is a regular browser of 4chan. I'm not sure whether that helps or hurts this story.

Actually, Ben-Gay torture isn't uncommon, and is far older than the internet. Ben-Gay: century-old threat to the nether regions of masochists and curious teenage boys.

saeku wrote:

Dr. Professor Science wrote:

... the Ben Gay thing makes me think this person is a regular browser of 4chan. I'm not sure whether that helps or hurts this story.

Actually, Ben-Gay torture isn't uncommon, and is far older than the internet. Ben-Gay: century-old threat to the nether regions of masochists and curious teenage boys.

Well, I know next to nothing about Ben-Gay in general. I've never used the stuff. I have no idea when it came into existence. Honestly my only contact with Ben-Gay is that one screenshot of 4chan.