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PostSubject: "Raping Little Suzie": Another gem from the bowels of Gurochan Lit Archives. NWS   Sun Nov 01, 2009 9:35 pm

Raping Little Suzy.

Since this fic is basically unquotable, this will be painful, yet short.

Our story starts out with a charming scene of underage incest, as our nameless protagonist is given a blowjob by one of his daughters. Charmingly, the topic du jour turns to moar rape -- well, isn't that a common subject around the dinner table, like at breakfast? You get your orange juice, your bacon, and your fried rape, sunny side up!

Apparently, our protagonist needs to rape his littlest daughter Suzie, due to some sort of unnamed plague that requires fathers to rape their underage daughters. It's like 12 Monkeys meets NAMBLA, or some such shit.

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"Daddy," said my daughter Karen, trying to get my attention.

"Hey, dad... maybe we shouldn't rape anyone, huh? Just a thought."

"... Fap-fic, honey, this is a fap-fic."

"Oh... right. Okay, what's all this plague bullshit then, dad?"

"Semblance of a plot. Sort of like Playboy's articles, but vague as hell and really, really stupid."

"Why is it there, then?"

"So the guys who read this can say they're reading an actual story and not just a fap-fic, sweetie."

".... Oh."

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"Isn't it about time, you raped Suzy?" The little girl's voice was getting ragged,
so I patched her vocal cords with some thread and new fabric.

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"Gee, Honey," I said, "our daughter's only 4 years old!

Kids grow up so fast these days, don't they?

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Give the little girl a chance. I didn't rape you, until you were over 6 years old, you know. Even then, I was a little bit early. You didn't get pregnant, until you were 7, and didn't keep one, until you were 8.

That must have made third grade a chore to go through.

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Even your sister. . ." I was interrupted by Diane, as she told her own story.

"Daddy raped me for the first time, when I was 5," she said

"And I was at kindergarten and I was all like, "Bitches, you ain't been raped yet!" And then I stuck out my tongue like this! And they were all like, "No wai!" and I was like..."

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"Oh Shit!" said my little sister, at our daughter's words.

"We're in a horrible rapefic! LET US OUT, LET US OUT FOR THE LOVE OF...."

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"Unh! unnngh! Augghh.



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The whole family was getting exited,

They were exiting this fic? I don't blame them. Watch your steps, folks.

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watching me get ready
to projectile-vomit all over the author of this story?

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Already, I was trying to figure a way to fit raping little Suzy into my schedule.

Just gotta plan for that sort of thing, you know? Squeeze it in after brunch and between gym session.

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I knew, that somehow I'd make it fit.

... because it's small?

...Okay, not going there again.

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I knew that SOME men didn't see raping their little girls as a chore, in fact, I'd heard some of them say they liked the sound of children screaming in pain underneath them.

Yeah, we call those people, "child rapists".

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To me, they were unfeeling clods.

Obviously, our protagonist is made of fine child-raping stuff.

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It might be necessary, but that doesn't mean we should like it.

Just lay back and think of England, rapist.

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If the little girl had been having periods already. . . I shuddered at the possibilities, if I didn't get my daughter inseminated properly, and in time.

What, the universe will spontaneously turn into a pretzel? Dogs will frolic with kittens and mailmen? Twilight will become a good book series? What?

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My sister Kelly had been almost 8, when she had her first period. She thought she knew all the reason's for the "tie-
downs," as she'd watched her two little sisters get raped once a month, for over a year. She wasn't old enough to be told the true reason yet. When Momma made that pumpkin pie, on a "tie- down" night, Kelly figured that it was for her, and she hid. The precocious girl managed somehow to stay hidden for 10 days, and by then it was too late. Daddy tried to do his best. He fucked my little sister for three straight nights, but it didn't do any
good. I'll never forget Kelly. She only lived two more weeks, and it wasn't nice. I can still hear her screams. What's especially bad, is that painkillers don't help.

Maybe she was forced to read this story three straight nights in a row. Painkillers don't help that, either.

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The doctors tried everything, but knew in advance, that it wouldn't help. Only if she'd been one of those lucky enough to be living her whole life, in the sealed cities, would she have
had a chance. Even there, I hear they occasionally have a case. Out here, the chances are 100 per cent.

Bullshititis: It's fatal.

...Or maybe it's Bullshites (pronounced like diabetes) You can sound like Wilford Brimley and call it the "SHEETUS".

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I shuddered again. That wouldn't happen to Suzy. Even if I accidentally killed the little girl, it would be better than what
happened to Kelly.

It was necessary to kill the child in order to save her.

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When I told the boss, that I had to rape my daughter that night, for her first time, she sympathetically let me go an hour earlier.

She should have given him a "Happy Rape" card.

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I went over to my sister's grave, and threw some flowers down on it from the bridge.

He shoots, he scores! GOOOOOOOOOOAL

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Just before bedtime, Suzy came over, gave ME a hug, a kiss, and whispered in my ear, "It's OK, Daddy. Really!" and trotted off, to be tied
down.

What every child rapist longs to hear...

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My jaw dropped. Suzy knew! Somehow the little girl knew. And she had gone to her room quietly, with no fighting. Tears ran down my cheeks, as I thought of my love for the little girl.

What every 'gentle' child rapist thinks they feel....

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Well, in spite of (or because of) my love for my child, I wouldn't stint on her tonight. Suzy would get it all, even if she was only 4 years old.

BOW CHICKA WOW WOW

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If my little girl died tonight, too torn up, then I would die too, but only inside. I'd keep working, but I'd only be a husk. Too many people depended on me, for me to take my own life.

You noble rapist, you. Where's the emoticon of the crying bald eagle with the American flag behind it when we need it? Crying or Very sad

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For the next hour, I tried to lose myself in watching TV,

"Let's see... American Rapist Idol, So You Think You Can Rape, Rape Survivor, The Amazing Rape, America's Next Top Rapist, More to Rape... DAMMIT I HATE REALITY TV!"

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The nano-engineers were still years away from a solution to the plague.

RANDOM NANO-ENGINEER: Hey man, we're just enjoying all the rape.

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I knew that without the bio-engineered helper-pills, I wouldn't even be able to have an erection at the thought of what my little girl would go through, let alone be able to rape her properly.

...Rape... properly?

Uh-huuuuuh.

Anyway, so he takes a pill, and suddenly turns into a ravening rapist.

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Suddenly, I was no longer scared. I was a MAN, and I knew what needed doing, and I was going to DO it.



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The smell hit me like a ton of bricks.

"Yep... it's the story."

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I suddenly had no control over my body, as I started licking ..., like a man fresh from the desert would go for ice-cream.

I... what? Mixed metaphors, ahoy!

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It was definitely the "right-time-of-month" for the little-girl/woman.



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I let out a loud, "Grraauuugh!" My arousal had reached a point, where I HAD to do something.

Kill yourself.

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Eleven and a half inches of cock were somehow going to go into that little forty-two inch body. By the time you subtracted a foot and a half for her legs. . . My cock was going to be halfway up in her chest, when I bottomed out. I felt proud, that I had such a big cock. The contrast was something.

...

......

...........

Yeah, I got nothing at this point.

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I was proud of myself. Not many men could tear a girl, just by
sticking his cock inside her.

Yep. Still nothing.

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This goaty thought,

BAAAAAAAAAH

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was enough to make me climax for the first time.

Wow, you mean all those other times....?

Never mind.

Anyhoo. LOTS OF RAPE HAPPENS. She dies.

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I felt wonderful, satisfied as never before. I had proved my maleness on this insignificant female form. I was
magnificent. I was a MAN! I was. . . . I was. . . . I was a man who had just brutally murdered his own little 4-year-old daughter.

Yup.

Anyhow, she's brought back to life through the amazing powers of SCIENCE!

And there is a heartwarming ending:

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I think Karen figured that she had lost both of us, as it was now
over two hours into our isolation period, and she hadn't heard from me. Thankfully, I had good news.

"Karen," I said, barely able to get the words out through my suddenly constricted throat, as I thought of how close I had come to never seeing either her OR Suzy again, "we both made it."
I then started weeping uncontrollably, as my thumb dropped from the button.

BAAAAAW POOR WIDDLE RAPIST. BAAAAAAAW
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PostSubject: Re: "Raping Little Suzie": Another gem from the bowels of Gurochan Lit Archives. NWS   Mon Nov 02, 2009 4:59 am

I remember this one! It legitimately horrified me. Still does. Not sure why it, out of all the terrible things I've read, gets to me so badly.
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PostSubject: Re: "Raping Little Suzie": Another gem from the bowels of Gurochan Lit Archives. NWS   Mon Nov 02, 2009 6:27 pm

Ayezur wrote:
I remember this one! It legitimately horrified me. Still does. Not sure why it, out of all the terrible things I've read, gets to me so badly.

I was feeling the same thing. I think I've finally parsed out why this bothers me so much more than the other toddler-rape stories we've seen here. The attempt at a plot, the use of 'helper' drugs, etc, says to me that the person who wrote this is perfectly aware how horrible and awful this is, knows it is wrong, knows its wrong to get off on this, and is trying to create excuses for why it's ok to fuck a toddler to death.
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PostSubject: Re: "Raping Little Suzie": Another gem from the bowels of Gurochan Lit Archives. NWS   Mon Nov 02, 2009 6:41 pm

rae wrote:
I think I've finally parsed out why this bothers me so much more than the other toddler-rape stories we've seen here. The attempt at a plot, the use of 'helper' drugs, etc, says to me that the person who wrote this is perfectly aware how horrible and awful this is, knows it is wrong, knows its wrong to get off on this, and is trying to create excuses for why it's ok to fuck a toddler to death.

But she comes back to life, and he's all happy and relieved that he didn't kill her, and she loves him, and his other rape victims love him and give him blowjobs while he plays with their nipples, so that makes it AAAAAAAWWWRIGHT! [You must be registered and logged in to see this image.]
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PostSubject: Re: "Raping Little Suzie": Another gem from the bowels of Gurochan Lit Archives. NWS   Mon Nov 02, 2009 7:39 pm

I'm sorry, but, no matter how good the sporking, toddler rape will never be funny. This was sick and disturbing.
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PostSubject: Re: "Raping Little Suzie": Another gem from the bowels of Gurochan Lit Archives. NWS   Mon Nov 02, 2009 8:25 pm

rae wrote:
Ayezur wrote:
I remember this one! It legitimately horrified me. Still does. Not sure why it, out of all the terrible things I've read, gets to me so badly.

I was feeling the same thing. I think I've finally parsed out why this bothers me so much more than the other toddler-rape stories we've seen here. The attempt at a plot, the use of 'helper' drugs, etc, says to me that the person who wrote this is perfectly aware how horrible and awful this is, knows it is wrong, knows its wrong to get off on this, and is trying to create excuses for why it's ok to fuck a toddler to death.

Precisely. It's like the continued mention of 'the plague,' and the whole story about his sister dying horribly because she didn't get raped in time, so it's something that HAS to be done if the kid's gonna live. It's an attempt to write kiddie porn with a plot, which actually makes it worse than if it were just your usual pedophiliac bullshit. Pedophiles don't fucking CARE if they hurt the kid they're molesting, and this bastard wants us to pretend that they do.
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PostSubject: Re: "Raping Little Suzie": Another gem from the bowels of Gurochan Lit Archives. NWS   Mon Nov 02, 2009 9:32 pm

Rabid Badger wrote:
Pedophiles don't fucking CARE if they hurt the kid they're molesting, and this bastard wants us to pretend that they do.

Well, not all pedophiles, just this one, 'cuz he's like, special and stuff:

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knew that SOME men didn't see raping their little girls as a chore, in
fact, I'd heard some of them say they liked the sound of children
screaming in pain underneath them.

...

To me, they were unfeeling clods.

See, raping kids is a chore. This guy has got to take a pill so that he can do it! It's painful for him to think of hurting his daughter! He's a super-duper-speschul-snowflake child rapist, OBVIOUSLY.
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PostSubject: Re: "Raping Little Suzie": Another gem from the bowels of Gurochan Lit Archives. NWS   Mon Nov 02, 2009 10:29 pm

Malganis wrote:
Rabid Badger wrote:
Pedophiles don't fucking CARE if they hurt the kid they're molesting, and this bastard wants us to pretend that they do.

Well, not all pedophiles, just this one, 'cuz he's like, special and stuff:

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I
knew that SOME men didn't see raping their little girls as a chore, in
fact, I'd heard some of them say they liked the sound of children
screaming in pain underneath them.

...

To me, they were unfeeling clods.

See, raping kids is a chore. This guy has got to take a pill so that he can do it! It's painful for him to think of hurting his daughter! He's a super-duper-speschul-snowflake child rapist, OBVIOUSLY.

Great, just what we needed. Badfics first Pedophile Stu :headshot:
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PostSubject: Re: "Raping Little Suzie": Another gem from the bowels of Gurochan Lit Archives. NWS   Wed Nov 04, 2009 11:04 am

Wait, I don't get it, what's up with that desease? *tries reading the story*

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Ack, nevermind, I'd rather be confused.

Edit: Okay, so the part explaining all of it is in the comments. Wow, so much effort someone put into the attempt to make his child-raping character sympathetic. [You must be registered and logged in to see this image.]
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PostSubject: Re: "Raping Little Suzie": Another gem from the bowels of Gurochan Lit Archives. NWS   Sat Jul 28, 2012 6:41 pm

THERE ARE POSITIVE REVIEWS FOR THIS THING.

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I really loved this story. There was a plot, but it didn't hinder the sexuality like so many written sexual episodes,

OHMIGOSH DON'T YOU HATE IT WHEN PORN HAS A PLOT IT GETS IN THE WAY OF THE CHILD RAPE

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but it was also enough to quirk my interest beyond the sex scenes. Reason was given (although vague) for why exactly this person is doing what he is, and a deeper sub-plot is talked about.

JUST GIVE US THE MOST MEAGER EXPLANATION POSSIBLE SO IT'S OKAY

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I really enjoyed the sex scenes, I printed this off last night and took it to bed to read. Ended up coating my entire torso in cum lol.

PEOPLE. GET. OFF. TO. THIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIISSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS.

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My only advice is that the author try to write a sequel, and perhaps make more/longer scenes involving sex acts while under the influence of this "nano-factory".

YEAH THE CHILD RAPE WAS PRETTY COOL BUT YOU KNOW WHAT IT NEEDED? MORE CHILD RAPE.

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Great job, I give it a 7.5/10 overall! Keep up the good work! =D

I. HATE. THIS. PERSON.

In all seriousness, I suppose this kind of story would be interesting if the moral issue was truly discussed and deconstructed. Would you rather rape your child, or let them suffer a horribly painful death? In a certain society, could the vulgar rape of children truly be embraced by the mainstream? This basic premise could make a piece of literature that I would be proud to have read.

But the person who wrote it so clearly didn't care about any of that. All they cared about was getting off and impressing their pedophile friends with a ridiculous amount of highly-fetishized junior rape scenes.

Overall, I would love to meet both the reviewer above and the writer of this fic so I could beat the shit out of them.
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PostSubject: Re: "Raping Little Suzie": Another gem from the bowels of Gurochan Lit Archives. NWS   Sat Jul 28, 2012 7:01 pm

OOH LOOK ANOTHER ONE

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Oh my god..I loved the rapping little suzy story.. *shiver* It was like, Cum a zillion times. I love the idea of a girl being ruined on the inside by a masive cock.. its just sooo fucking hot. And then with such a young child. Its even more hot.

If you have anything else please emaile me at

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This person didn't even bother trying to make himself sound intelligent.

Somebody, please sign this guy up for as much spam as you can find. This was posted in 2007, so it might not be in use anymore, but I think we all need to do it just out of principle. I just got him started on "Evangelist Weekly" and "Preacher's Daily," so don't bother with those.
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PostSubject: Re: "Raping Little Suzie": Another gem from the bowels of Gurochan Lit Archives. NWS   Sun Jul 29, 2012 12:15 am

Y'know they have one with Anne Frank...oh internet, always so tasteful in addressing the sufferings of a teenage girl who died young and horribly...needless to say, I'm really hoping it's a troll but given what the internet has taught me over and over again... Shocked I'm gonna need to up my dosage of Repressitol again.
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