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Dimensia

Dimensia


Join date : 2011-02-13
Location : America

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PostSubject: Please critique my weak areas.   Please critique my weak areas. EmptyWed Feb 16, 2011 8:55 pm

It's another one of those "sucked into a videogame" fics, but it's a Sue against a character who remains in-character and can't stand her.

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