Anybody want to give me honest help

First of all I'd like to say my style of writing isn't the best (I've read some people's work that made me want to bury myself under a rock). Secondly, if you do give me honest critic I'd love you to death (not literally). Last but not least, I started this story years ago and then stopped writing altogether. Now, my intrests have peeked again and I couldn't resist rewriting and then expanding on this fanfic.

The main characters are Sabretooth/Storm with some Storm/Wolverine thrown in. There's a bit of role reversal with the two ferals though, I must maintain that Sabretooth is still looney as a bird and sociopathic. Feed back would be awesome and great.

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Thanks
T.S.Orr