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What bout My Immortal? Doesn't she count as a troll, she has "Fangz" after all.

This fic wishes it could be "My Immortal."

I_Lam_Edhellen wrote:

The use of Fangirl-languagese is utterly appalling. This odd phrase here, which they wanted to be an endearment, actually means, "Wax the squirrel, knave."

I don't know. It could be argued that this is one of the more believable parts of the fic, given the context in which it is used, the sick, sick bastards.

But nothing is worse than "Chapter 57: Goblet of Fire Graveyard Redux" where Voldemort uses the rolled up newspaper...NEWSPAPERS ARE NOT TO BE USED THAT WAY!

I know, right?! And the part where the author brings the nazi party into it is atrocious!

Though the whole scene at the air port with the puppy pile cavity search was factual. Sort of. The flame thrower was over the top though.

Has anyone seen the new update? -shudder- It's almost as bad as Chapter 28, and that's saying something. Lord, I'll never be able to eat lasagna again...

Don't forget the whole mess in Chapter 48! My god, a ceiling fan is not designed for that sort of thing!

And for fuck's sake, would it really kill them ease up on their clothing descriptions? YOUR SURROUNDINGS NEED LOVE TOO. I mean, I really don't need to hear what kind of fishnets the Sue is wearing. Again.

Happenstance wrote:

And for fuck's sake, would it really kill them ease up on their clothing descriptions? YOUR SURROUNDINGS NEED LOVE TOO. I mean, I really don't need to hear what kind of fishnets the Sue is wearing. Again.

Heh, let's not even get started on the clothing description. You'd think that the author had some sort of advertising deal with Victoria's Secret or Leg Avenue.

Happenstance wrote:

I know, right?! And the part where the author brings the nazi party into it is atrocious!

Especially since we're clearly meant to sympathize with the Nazis.

Did anyone else get flamed by the author for leaving an honest review? I had to look up in a dictionary some of the words, and still don't understand how s/he came to believe that I get my kicks from sodomizing frozen bullfrogs in French maid uniforms.

The Unoriginal wrote:

Did anyone else get flamed by the author for leaving an honest review? I had to look up in a dictionary some of the words, and still don't understand how s/he came to believe that I get my kicks from sodomizing frozen bullfrogs in French maid uniforms.

It wasn't worth the time. A story this bad could not be corrected solely in one honest review. There is so much wrong that even TRYING to review it would only mean having a puke-bucket on hand.

Yeah and did you see the HURP DEE DURP DEE TWEEDLEY DEE

I SAW ALICE COOPER LIVE IN CONCERT TONIGHT THE MAN IS OUT OF HIS MIND

And those insults make no sense! I left a comment on how "spitroast" doesn't have a q in it, nor does it have an x or a j, and s/he called me, and I quote, a "FUKIG PREPY HOMEPHOABIK NASI FSGHPT"

Oh I'm sorry, maybe I didn't make myself clear - your replies aren't funny. Grumbles' replies were funny. Happenstance's first reply was funny. The rest of you ran in here desperate for attention and tracked in a diarrhea trail of unfunny all over the place. Ruining a beautiful thing like the people who go to an Alice Cooper concert only to wander in and out ignoring Alice Cooper WITH HIS HEAD IN A GUILLOTINE ON STAGE to buy more beer so they can inconveniece everyone a second time by getting up to piss. Which means they have to buy more beer and so on and so on in a never ending cycle of beer and piss. Here's an idea, just pour the fucking beer straight down the toilet because if you push past me when Def Leppard come on I will jujutsu you. BEER AND PISS.

Cool quote, bro.

And again, I Llol'd.

Cyberwulf wrote:

Grumbles' replies were funny.

Ha, thank you, but now I have to go and look up what they were.

Quote :

a never ending cycle of beer and piss

If I ever end up in a band -and it's not likely, but if I do- I will insist that this be the title of our first album.



e: PS I'm really loving my post juxtaposed with my sig, just now.

Cyberwulf wrote:

BEER AND PISS.

And Vash the Stampede's quest to spread them across the planet Gunsmoke.

KJM wrote:

Happenstance wrote:

I know, right?! And the part where the author brings the nazi party into it is atrocious!

Especially since we're clearly meant to sympathize with the Nazis.

They're certainly easier to sympathise with than the rest of the characters.

I wonder what the author intended when he/she wrote "juxtaposition the car."

I bet anangrychocobo is laughing.