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Reidmar
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PostSubject: Re: This fic   Tue Jun 07, 2011 9:20 am

What bout My Immortal? Doesn't she count as a troll, she has "Fangz" after all.
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PostSubject: Re: This fic   Tue Jun 07, 2011 1:29 pm

This fic wishes it could be "My Immortal."
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PostSubject: Re: This fic   Tue Jun 07, 2011 2:30 pm

I_Lam_Edhellen wrote:
The use of Fangirl-languagese is utterly appalling. This odd phrase here, which they wanted to be an endearment, actually means, "Wax the squirrel, knave."

I don't know. It could be argued that this is one of the more believable parts of the fic, given the context in which it is used, the sick, sick bastards.
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PostSubject: Re: This fic   Tue Jun 07, 2011 4:27 pm

But nothing is worse than "Chapter 57: Goblet of Fire Graveyard Redux" where Voldemort uses the rolled up newspaper...NEWSPAPERS ARE NOT TO BE USED THAT WAY!
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PostSubject: Re: This fic   Tue Jun 07, 2011 6:09 pm

I know, right?! And the part where the author brings the nazi party into it is atrocious!
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PostSubject: Re: This fic   Tue Jun 07, 2011 6:18 pm

Though the whole scene at the air port with the puppy pile cavity search was factual. Sort of. The flame thrower was over the top though.
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PostSubject: Re: This fic   Tue Jun 07, 2011 8:10 pm

Has anyone seen the new update? -shudder- It's almost as bad as Chapter 28, and that's saying something. Lord, I'll never be able to eat lasagna again... pale
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PostSubject: Re: This fic   Tue Jun 07, 2011 9:14 pm

Don't forget the whole mess in Chapter 48! My god, a ceiling fan is not designed for that sort of thing!
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PostSubject: Re: This fic   Tue Jun 07, 2011 9:57 pm

And for fuck's sake, would it really kill them ease up on their clothing descriptions? YOUR SURROUNDINGS NEED LOVE TOO. I mean, I really don't need to hear what kind of fishnets the Sue is wearing. Again.
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PostSubject: Re: This fic   Tue Jun 07, 2011 11:39 pm

Happenstance wrote:
And for fuck's sake, would it really kill them ease up on their clothing descriptions? YOUR SURROUNDINGS NEED LOVE TOO. I mean, I really don't need to hear what kind of fishnets the Sue is wearing. Again.
Heh, let's not even get started on the clothing description. You'd think that the author had some sort of advertising deal with Victoria's Secret or Leg Avenue.
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PostSubject: Re: This fic   Wed Jun 08, 2011 3:58 am

Happenstance wrote:
I know, right?! And the part where the author brings the nazi party into it is atrocious!
Especially since we're clearly meant to sympathize with the Nazis.
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PostSubject: Re: This fic   Wed Jun 08, 2011 1:38 pm

Did anyone else get flamed by the author for leaving an honest review? I had to look up in a dictionary some of the words, and still don't understand how s/he came to believe that I get my kicks from sodomizing frozen bullfrogs in French maid uniforms.
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PostSubject: Re: This fic   Wed Jun 08, 2011 4:44 pm

The Unoriginal wrote:
Did anyone else get flamed by the author for leaving an honest review? I had to look up in a dictionary some of the words, and still don't understand how s/he came to believe that I get my kicks from sodomizing frozen bullfrogs in French maid uniforms.
It wasn't worth the time. A story this bad could not be corrected solely in one honest review. There is so much wrong that even TRYING to review it would only mean having a puke-bucket on hand.
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PostSubject: Re: This fic   Wed Jun 08, 2011 6:09 pm

Yeah and did you see the HURP DEE DURP DEE TWEEDLEY DEE

I SAW ALICE COOPER LIVE IN CONCERT TONIGHT THE MAN IS OUT OF HIS MIND
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PostSubject: Re: This fic   Wed Jun 08, 2011 6:10 pm

And those insults make no sense! I left a comment on how "spitroast" doesn't have a q in it, nor does it have an x or a j, and s/he called me, and I quote, a "FUKIG PREPY HOMEPHOABIK NASI FSGHPT"
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PostSubject: Re: This fic   Wed Jun 08, 2011 6:24 pm

Oh I'm sorry, maybe I didn't make myself clear - your replies aren't funny. Grumbles' replies were funny. Happenstance's first reply was funny. The rest of you ran in here desperate for attention and tracked in a diarrhea trail of unfunny all over the place. Ruining a beautiful thing like the people who go to an Alice Cooper concert only to wander in and out ignoring Alice Cooper WITH HIS HEAD IN A GUILLOTINE ON STAGE to buy more beer so they can inconveniece everyone a second time by getting up to piss. Which means they have to buy more beer and so on and so on in a never ending cycle of beer and piss. Here's an idea, just pour the fucking beer straight down the toilet because if you push past me when Def Leppard come on I will jujutsu you. BEER AND PISS.
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PostSubject: Re: This fic   Wed Jun 08, 2011 7:45 pm

Cool quote, bro.
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PostSubject: Re: This fic   Thu Jun 09, 2011 8:26 am

And again, I Llol'd.


Cyberwulf wrote:
Grumbles' replies were funny.
Ha, thank you, but now I have to go and look up what they were. Razz


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a never ending cycle of beer and piss
If I ever end up in a band -and it's not likely, but if I do- I will insist that this be the title of our first album.



e: PS I'm really loving my post juxtaposed with my sig, just now.
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PostSubject: Re: This fic   Thu Jun 09, 2011 12:41 pm

Cyberwulf wrote:
BEER AND PISS.

And Vash the Stampede's quest to spread them across the planet Gunsmoke.
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PostSubject: Re: This fic   Fri Jun 10, 2011 1:06 am

KJM wrote:
Happenstance wrote:
I know, right?! And the part where the author brings the nazi party into it is atrocious!
Especially since we're clearly meant to sympathize with the Nazis.

They're certainly easier to sympathise with than the rest of the characters.
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PostSubject: Re: This fic   Fri Jun 10, 2011 9:26 am

I wonder what the author intended when he/she wrote "juxtaposition the car."
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PostSubject: Re: This fic   Fri Jun 10, 2011 9:37 am

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PostSubject: Re: This fic   Fri Jun 10, 2011 10:08 am

I bet anangrychocobo is laughing.
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