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PostSubject: This fic   Sun Jun 05, 2011 12:46 pm

Oh man it's so bad

the spelling

the prose

the plot OH GOD THE PLOT

so bad that I won't link to it
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PostSubject: Re: This fic   Sun Jun 05, 2011 1:57 pm

What fandom is it in?
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PostSubject: Re: This fic   Sun Jun 05, 2011 2:05 pm

OMG I LLOL'd.
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PostSubject: Re: This fic   Sun Jun 05, 2011 2:33 pm

Wait chocobo, I think I've read that one before.
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PostSubject: Re: This fic   Sun Jun 05, 2011 2:43 pm

It really is an execrable fic. The the things they do to the dog in it! pale
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PostSubject: Re: This fic   Sun Jun 05, 2011 6:41 pm

Forget the dog! What about the things they do to the chickens?
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PostSubject: Re: This fic   Sun Jun 05, 2011 10:18 pm

You're more disturbed from the chickens than the wombat?
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PostSubject: Re: This fic   Mon Jun 06, 2011 12:01 am

And just think of all the poor tennis stars involved. I mean really, it's disgusting!


(Also, Ian, I love your icon. Just had to say it.)
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PostSubject: Re: This fic   Mon Jun 06, 2011 5:33 am

(Thanks Happ. I'm proud that I'm a Brony.)

Actually, overall, some of the dialogue was unbelievably funny. It seemed like it was a philosophical discussion mixed with a bit of Tommy Wiseau.
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PostSubject: Re: This fic   Mon Jun 06, 2011 6:14 am

I couldn't get past the spelling, myself.
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PostSubject: Re: This fic   Mon Jun 06, 2011 8:57 am

It makes "Thirty Hs" look like "The Moment it Began"!
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PostSubject: Re: This fic   Mon Jun 06, 2011 9:57 am

Someone want to fill in the blanks as to which fic we're talking about here?
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PostSubject: Re: This fic   Mon Jun 06, 2011 1:36 pm

The use of Fangirl-languagese is utterly appalling. This odd phrase here, which they wanted to be an endearment, actually means, "Wax the squirrel, knave."
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PostSubject: Re: This fic   Mon Jun 06, 2011 2:01 pm

And the worst part about this story, is it's 75 chapters, and there's no character development! It's just rape with every conceivable paring!
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PostSubject: Re: This fic   Mon Jun 06, 2011 2:25 pm

i see what your doing.....


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PostSubject: Re: This fic   Mon Jun 06, 2011 3:38 pm

And not just every paring. This little shit goes across fandoms to terrorize the characters and creatures of multiple award winning franchises with inconceivable methods of BDSM and every iteration of pony play.

Just go to chapter 34. About half way down the page a grenade is used as a suppository. All I can say, is that Metal Gear is no longer Solid.


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PostSubject: Re: This fic   Mon Jun 06, 2011 3:48 pm

Grenades as suppositories, dear god... :
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PostSubject: Re: This fic   Mon Jun 06, 2011 3:56 pm

At least it's better than the canon.
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PostSubject: Re: This fic   Mon Jun 06, 2011 6:21 pm

I'm not familiar with the canon, myself. But I'm pretty sure that the Twilight crossover is not a good thing.
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PostSubject: Re: This fic   Mon Jun 06, 2011 6:35 pm

I mean, I thought it was bad enough to begin with, but add sparklepires to it and its over 9000 times worse. I can't even understand whats going on!
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PostSubject: Re: This fic   Mon Jun 06, 2011 6:56 pm

CaptainMcNeil wrote:
I mean, I thought it was bad enough to begin with, but add sparklepires to it and its over 9000 times worse. I can't even understand whats going on!
Well, for about 20 of those 75 chapters, it's the same situation but with different names instead. Not really all that creative.
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PostSubject: Re: This fic   Mon Jun 06, 2011 9:58 pm

TheIan wrote:
CaptainMcNeil wrote:
I mean, I thought it was bad enough to begin with, but add sparklepires to it and its over 9000 times worse. I can't even understand whats going on!
Well, for about 20 of those 75 chapters, it's the same situation but with different names instead. Not really all that creative.
And the other 55 chapters are set either in space, a Motel 6, or high school--it's impossible to tell which.
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PostSubject: Re: This fic   Mon Jun 06, 2011 9:59 pm

I want it to be a troll...but it's just too awful. I mean...no one's that dedicated, right?
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PostSubject: Re: This fic   Tue Jun 07, 2011 12:26 am

Happenstance wrote:
I want it to be a troll...but it's just too awful. I mean...no one's that dedicated, right?
I dunno, all 7,836 reviews are all signed by writers on the site, nothing short of praise. I think it's legit. No troll is dedicated to this kind of atrocity.
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PostSubject: Re: This fic   Tue Jun 07, 2011 8:32 am

TheIan wrote:
every conceivable paring!

Braigwen wrote:
not just every paring.


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